So instead of going out today, I chose to work on some rhymes, tweak some old ones and work on a new one. They are from a variety of times yet none older than early high school.
Call them poems, call them lines, whatever, not all rhyme perfectly, not all 'flow' very well but I like them..
N if no one else does, I'll still continue to put them up here
Oh n the title of each will be in the subject line_
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
Women at age 21,
learn to be light on their feet
Women at age twenty-one
appear to live on the streets
Life is filled with errands, everyday action,
and with men that do not meet their satisfaction
They know very well the meaning of relaxation
Being uniquely close to women that are 21,
must mean one has passed some difficult examination
At ease on the dance floor,
they cannot help but ignore
the responsibilities of a woman
who is no longer a girl but a lady
No longer the pretty girl but an appealing lady,
And as a true resemblance to mother
begins to emerge in resplendent reflections,
there is a growing desire for deeper affections
runs rampant through their mind,
as well as through the dance floor.
It forces one to take note that at age 24
the women portrayed above at age twenty-one,
will simply ask for more
Women at age 21 are unlike women
that are twenty-nine, 30, or even thirty-one,
Those women bring an almost perpetual
flow of extravagant emotions,
that run like dynamic rivers
without the flooding commotions
Women well past 21 are like the perfect sunset,
burning away the cool horizon that
represents one's unsought afflictions
Yet like that perfect sunset, they are an addiction,
a desire and no longer a blight since the only prediction
is their own desires at age twenty-four
Why attempt to write an excellent poem when
at age 24, they will precisely ask for more_
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
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Trapped In The Bathroom (Chap I)
... or Why I Shouldn't Eat Ice-Cream!!
I should not have been greedy...
driving to the store was only too easy...
For that sinfully sweet confection...
I'm walking around the store, meat in hand... w/ a confirmed 1/2 erection!!
Oooo... what flavor shall i get...??
Strawberry Shortcake, Cookies n' Creme, Rasberry w/ White Chock'lit Chunk, or my favorite of all... Cookie Dough!!
... aiight bet, get set... decisions... Cookie Dough it is!!
While i'm in here i could as well pick up some Nathan's hotdogs...
Oops, almost forgot the bun...
These things'll go down great on Sunday...
... YUMM!!
What a beautiful night...
49 degrees ouside... for ice cream, the temperature is just right!!
Get in front of the iMac G5 w/ ice cream & spoon in hand...
Checked my download of LOST...
855 KBps 7 min flat for the 349 MB file in HD, a new fastest record...
GOTTDAMN!!
i swore i ate ice cream the whole time LOST in HD was on...
... but a lil' bit of misinformation...
i'm lactose intolerant so i shouldn't have been eating it, i knew i was going to pay...
That 5 sec ago yummy ice cream was making it's way quickly thru my system, it wasn't planning to stay...
It was coming out, regardless of my wildest protests... the kicker is, it was coming out... the problem is... WHICH WAY??
Ughhh... went me as my tummy started having labor contractions...
Can i make it too the Pepto & stave off this painfull parturition??
Nope, not a chance...
I grabbed the laptop & tumbled into the bathroom...
@ least i will have something to read while awaiting my inevitable doom!!
Trapped In The Bathroom (Chap I)
... or Why I Shouldn't Eat Ice-Cream!!
I should not have been greedy...
driving to the store was only too easy...
For that sinfully sweet confection...
I'm walking around the store, meat in hand... w/ a confirmed 1/2 erection!!
Oooo... what flavor shall i get...??
Strawberry Shortcake, Cookies n' Creme, Rasberry w/ White Chock'lit Chunk, or my favorite of all... Cookie Dough!!
... aiight bet, get set... decisions... Cookie Dough it is!!
While i'm in here i could as well pick up some Nathan's hotdogs...
Oops, almost forgot the bun...
These things'll go down great on Sunday...
... YUMM!!
What a beautiful night...
49 degrees ouside... for ice cream, the temperature is just right!!
Get in front of the iMac G5 w/ ice cream & spoon in hand...
Checked my download of LOST...
855 KBps 7 min flat for the 349 MB file in HD, a new fastest record...
GOTTDAMN!!
i swore i ate ice cream the whole time LOST in HD was on...
... but a lil' bit of misinformation...
i'm lactose intolerant so i shouldn't have been eating it, i knew i was going to pay...
That 5 sec ago yummy ice cream was making it's way quickly thru my system, it wasn't planning to stay...
It was coming out, regardless of my wildest protests... the kicker is, it was coming out... the problem is... WHICH WAY??
Ughhh... went me as my tummy started having labor contractions...
Can i make it too the Pepto & stave off this painfull parturition??
Nope, not a chance...
I grabbed the laptop & tumbled into the bathroom...
@ least i will have something to read while awaiting my inevitable doom!!
... to be cont'd!!
haha did u write that jus then??
Definitely feeling the creativity_
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
There's this girl I noticed one morning,
really by mistake and right around nine...
I eventually noted-- her level of intellect is a level past mine.
What I like is that she's not the stereotyped 'Dime'
and see, after one sole conversation,
feels as if she's Truly hard to find (even better than 'one-of-a-kind')
Of course, I doubt I've ever really run through her mind;
least I enjoy how a one-time stranger could be so kind.
Now I can only hope I'll get closer to her over time,
steadily adding to this mistaken desire, line by line_
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
Man do I detest math
Fucken problems the book casts
Im usually the motherfucker who's done last
If I was free of this bitch-ass subject, I'd be done fast
with my damn major, not until I get past
this one fucking class, yeah call me a dumbass..
But Im fucken Mexican!!
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
I ammmmm The ONE-- but I aint gonna dance, on the floor...
she told me her name was...?
ppl always told me, be careful what you do.. I now tell them, never look back, cuz isnt it apparent that at this point I aint carin..?
Im jus starin and wearin the look thats never been new to Disdain-- yet the only pain I feel at current times is from a fall, something physical, not so typical (off a skateboard, yes) but call me darin' cuz ill take the risk, if I can be real brisk then its even better.. there's an incredibly few now that'd receive a senstation-filled letter, least not till im even more keen and filthy with green succes, aka that fucken cheddar..!
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
So to add to the still-standing Desire-- Line by line, time and times pass by, still feels like the damn timing's jus not right. I can almost conclude that this shit really is inevitable.
First is respect and humor, second, avoidance of any complimentary remark; inside its still cold/dark and who knows about the future, jus know that my own words wont ever be edible, jus fully descriptive and intertwined with bomb-ass rhymes. I feel the return to my prime, yes, that point in life is around the corner but is "happiness" there too? Humor comes into play here because with Green Success.. I'll never feel the blues, jus the comfort of a fresh pair of jordan kicks, the preferred Baller shoes--
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
Last edited by jayelleseven : 02-04-2007 at 03:57 AM.
to focus on physical interaction is the best way to take action
Why put up with the emotional grind
when half of these women are blind
to great personalities?
(they say that matters yet i see bigger smiles when a man's pockets get fatter)
they judge too quickly and all posses the same irrationality
we should be of the most dominant nationality
the type that obtains bomb model chics
yet females never speak of a universal-dick,
instead they choose n carefully pick
some whack-motherfuckers and i laugh
i laugh until the day they meet our cold wrath
lacking warmth, lacking bullshit passion, seems to be the best path
nowadays at least, n im sure we'll quickly find the right set of keys
that unlocks a woman's heart
we can then quickly part
to the next and next after
ha, the laughter i cant avoid
cuz women have but a sole task:
to fill our prominant void
void because we cant be satisfied till we've had the best ones undressed
no shock there, cuz every motherfucker's got exactly this rhyme to confess_
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
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