She makes, the hairs, on the back of my, neck stand up..
jus one touch--
--One touch, a physical interaction, much more than emotional action
yet I’m stuck with a superficial attraction…
How do I define a likely Infatuation?
As a vivid and -sultry fascination,
cuz if ‘a grain of sand represented’ Beauty ‘to treasure,
her looks would be like ‘the Sahara Desert’_
still, I’m better than getting into Infinite-type measures
since I’m certain a girl like that won't mean Infinite-type pleasure,
I know about being coldly replaced, so never would I boldly chase
Jus’ note that remaining keen, now that's essential
Simply so letting go of feelings that are detrimental,
would be readily done.
Never knew it was best to stick to sensual-type fun.
Never knew it was excellent compared to emotional satisfaction…
I’ll step-back and steadily prepare for my eminent run
as a modern-day Romeo to traverse
the Sahara Desert under a -sultry Sun_
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
this is much better than your other ones...first half is good...then it started to suck.....
hey thanks for comment, I did the end real quick, dont like it much, I go back sometimes n tweak em.
I got a few more but wit ppl like superdude coming around whoring then I wont bother putting them up.
I think I've made like one rhyme that I thought was real good, the rest Im never happy wit, even if ppl think they great n all that jazz_
I jus write, to write, I like it and like the responses I get :]
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
Man, do u not know shit about lyrics and rhmying? Why dont u look at the lines around the ones you pointed out, ...eminent run rhymes with the line after the one u quoted (its sultry summer sun)
and if treasure and desert dont rhyme well then many lyrics dont either, the english language is easily manipulated because of vocab variety, not exacty rhyming sounds.
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
No I dont, I really enjoy it. So ill find time for it.
I do accounting for my fathers business, started my own detailing business, work part time, have a summer class at college, work out, and play ball. Not to mention time for friends and females.
I still find time for it, jus like improving my 3 pt shot-- wont benefit me in the long run but I LOVE IT_
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got no smile and lack a lavish lifestyle but its cool cuz I came up hungry, jus a lil Latino tryin to make it and when I make it.. I promise the world wont lightly take it.
Man, do u not know shit about lyrics and rhmying? Why dont u look at the lines around the ones you pointed out, ...eminent run rhymes with the line after the one u quoted (its sultry summer sun)
and if treasure and desert dont rhyme well then many lyrics dont either, the english language is easily manipulated because of vocab variety, not exacty rhyming sounds.
No I dont, I really enjoy it. So ill find time for it.
I do accounting for my fathers business, started my own detailing business, work part time, have a summer class at college, work out, and play ball. Not to mention time for friends and females.
I still find time for it, jus like improving my 3 pt shot-- wont benefit me in the long run but I LOVE IT_
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